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Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« on: May 16, 2023, 11:00:49 am »
Entering the dance circle, sand soft under her feet, bells adorning both ankles, black chalwar pants revealing a taught belly. A red silk band criss crosses her breasts, revealing their shape, tied behind her back.
Long, golden blonde hair cascades down her back, green eyes sparkle with nervousness and joy.

Just before the music begins, she stands in a starting pose, hips tucked, back straight, head high, left arm arcing above her head, right arm at an angle to her side.

When the song begins, she kneels, crossing her wrists to bring them above a bowed head; the position of submission. She looks up, eyes wide, and pulls her arms, but they seem to be held or bound by an invisible force. Her back arches, bringing her breasts forward, her head falls back.
Then arms released, she touches the collar adorning her neck, with wonder and fear showing in her emerald eyes.

She rises to her feet, as though commanded, standing straight, still for a moment.

Then begins a slow, seductive beat of drum and strings, to which she moves sensuously, her body writhing, belly fluttering, arms in front of her, undulating one after the other. She stands still again, her hips pistoning side to side, up and down a few times, before her arms join in, swaying in time with her hip movements. Swinging her upper body into a full circle, her arms move to the sides, undulating like snakes, then they come together before her as though bound and she walks across the sand, hips accentuating the movement. A twirl and she arches backwards, as though pulled, blonde hair falling behind her, only to be stood upright again.

The music picks up tempo, her hips pop faster, a shimmy of delight, arms swaying from her sides, to move upwards above her head before descending down to frame her hips. Once again her hands caress the collar she wears about her throat, but this time a smile of joy bursts upon her face and into her green eyes. With her left arm horizontal to her chest, her right hand makes a circle about her face, bringing attention to the happiness that she feels.

Opening her arms wide, she circles her hips into a moving bow, arms beckoning in a movement of “come to me” embrace.   Arms snake and hips shimmy up, down, side, up, down side, alternating hips. She twirls, sand lifting up about her feet, pure enthusiasm in her movements.

Her upper body sways, her arms serpentine as though pulled by invisible bonds. As the music comes to a crescendo, she kneels, once again assuming the position of submission as the song ends.
La kajira.

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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #1 on: May 16, 2023, 01:04:30 pm »
well done
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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #2 on: May 16, 2023, 01:24:10 pm »
Thank you, Master.
La kajira.

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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #3 on: May 16, 2023, 03:52:46 pm »
wish i had been there to watch you.

well done.
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« Reply #4 on: May 22, 2023, 11:02:10 pm »
what a beautiful dance zahra. 

lila hopes next time she can see the GS slave girl dance in person.

"It is expected, at least by some Masters, that the slave is to be grateful for her beatings.  she has, after all, received the Master's attention.  Similarly, she should rejoice that she has been improved."~Prize of Gor, p 245~

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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #5 on: May 23, 2023, 06:57:22 am »
Thank you very much!
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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #6 on: May 23, 2023, 08:43:31 am »
it would have been nice in person...however, its not bad for a first dance

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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #7 on: May 23, 2023, 10:26:28 am »
kyla....seriously?

This might have been part of a silks lesson she needed to do.  (If bria is remembering the lessons in order)

Of course it might have been nice to see it in person,  but she chose to do it here .  Either for part of a lesson, or maybe she didn't want to dance alone in the Tavern? *shrugs*

And it's not bad for a first dance?  Way to passive aggressively put someone's dance down!  bria knows it isn't always a natural thing to be put on the spot and dance "publicly".  Stage fright is a real thing. 

Zahra,  you did amazingly!  You've already received many accolades by those who matter.   Ignore those that don't matter.  Period ..way to go beauty!!  *hugs tight*
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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #8 on: May 23, 2023, 10:56:25 am »
zahra
you did very well for a first dance
I find it very pleasing

and fortunately all you have to do is please the Captains
"In one sense, she is nothing, and is to be treated as such, but, in another sense, she is precious, and is everything."

    Guardsman of Gor, page 260
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« Reply #9 on: May 23, 2023, 01:17:05 pm »
Well done zahra, a lovely dance

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« Reply #10 on: May 23, 2023, 03:59:10 pm »
Can't wait to see you dance in person.  this one is just so good! 
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« Reply #11 on: May 23, 2023, 05:14:53 pm »
Just shakes my head, 

lila thought it was a real good dance.
Each of lila's sisters dance beautifully. 
there are reasons why lila's dances are not on the corks.

That being said lila has enjoyed every dance each sister has done. Whether it's a short couple paragraph dance or a full fledge book dance. 
Every slaves writing style is unique and intricate...bravo zahra. 

lila hopes next time she can see zahra dance in person.
"It is expected, at least by some Masters, that the slave is to be grateful for her beatings.  she has, after all, received the Master's attention.  Similarly, she should rejoice that she has been improved."~Prize of Gor, p 245~

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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #12 on: May 23, 2023, 07:29:24 pm »
"The dancing girls of Port Kar are said to be the best of all Gor. They are sought eagerly in the many cities of the planet. They are slave to the core, viscous, treacherous, cunning, seductive, sensuous, dangerous, desirable, excruciatingly desirable."
Raiders of Gor, Pg. 100


zahra

it's plain to see why my Master, bestowed GS steel to you lovely one - a beautiful expressive book dance

kudos - claps wildly

"I turned to the musicians. Do you know, asked, I, "the Love Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl?"
"Port Kar's?" asked the leader of the musicians.
"Yes," I said. "
Raiders of Gor     Book 6     Pages 115
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"She had known then that she was his, and in perfection. I had no doubt they fitted together, in the order of nature, in the most intimate, beautiful and fulfilling relationship possible between a man and a woman, that of love master and love slave"
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Re: Dance of the Newly Collared Slave Girl
« Reply #13 on: May 24, 2023, 05:13:23 am »
Congratulations on a lovely dance,  beautiful zahra.

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